SURREALISM A world - real yet so unreal, So abstract and so surreal, Of a fractional dimension, Appearing as a hallucination. A world - that begets reality, Where time is eternity, Where matter is non-existent, And there's no past, future or present. A world - with a spectral ambience, With a mind-boggling fragrance, And fusion of delight with fear Like a movie starring our near and dear. Such is the world a night's dream, A tributary of our life's stream. |
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A sonnet describing the fractal world of a night's dream. (Repost)
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 I enjoyed reading this because I've never read a poem like this. I really need to learn the 'ropes' of poetry, such as the different types/methods to write, etc as I've always just written to vent.
 Great work, I really like your first stanza. As for critique, the only thing I would suggest would be to omit the title within the text because the title is already said... that's what the deviation title is for  But nice work none the less  -- "Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss Proud supporter of =RawEm0tion =Thumbshare *ArtForTheEscape ahh thank you for taking time to read and comment on this...
and remove the title from the text? i guess ill have to do that from all my literature works  im too lazy xP-- Love the sinner, hate the sin. Appreciate people for who they are. $himanshu-kapoor -- "Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss Proud supporter of =RawEm0tion =Thumbshare *ArtForTheEscape |
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